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Hmm, think I'd clone out that dark spot on the ground between her legs.
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Ok. But she looks like my cats when they're beaming with pride after a productive trip to the litter box.
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Seriously, Josh, the photo is technically well done. But I'm missing the point here. What are you trying to convey?
Please don't take this the wrong way and this is my own personal opinion and as such should be taken with a very big grain of salt, but I can't get the connection between the models and their surroundings. I'm not into "edgy," being an old fart and all, so maybe it's all just beyond me.
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take out the background - are you happy with the model?
take out the model - are you happy with the background? light your scene and frame your scene before you throw in the model. then light your model separately, without the light on the scene. then put the two together.
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That is very well put Ryan! I think I will use that as a mantra when/if I ever get to really shoot a "model" shoot. |
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I think the model looks fine in the photo, the plants/weeds have to go though. There are just too distracting from your subject (her of course). Maybe a little tighter on the model to cut back on how much the plants interfere with the shot? |
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if i cut in tighter on her, then i lose more of the backdrop. i have a couple shots that are tighter. the only plants i think are distracting are the defocused ones in the foreground, and i for whatever reason felt it would be a good idea to crouch there that night. the rest of them sort of add to the ambiance.
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shooting models with a 20mm or lower lens close up on a full frame is a HUGE no...for me, at least. lens distortion does really unflattering things to faces, etc. i try not to go wider than 35mm. I'm sure dave will come in here and tout dxo optics pro as a good fix for that, but i've never really found correction software to be as effective on human subjects. i'd rather just do it correctly on scene.
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most (nearly all published ones) portraits are done with focal lengths 35mm or longer. Almost every pro photographer will tell you the same thing as what Josh told us. That being said, I've also taken some portraits with a wider-angle lens without any noticeable issues. But, most pro photographer will use a 50mm, 85mm, or even 135mm length (although that's pushing it).
There is a caveat though, I'm generally talking about head shots, or even shoulder shots. Full-body shots can utilize wider-angle lenses as long as they don't distort a ton (like a 11-16mm Tokina). Sometimes group shots even require wider lenses, and even distortions may make for a more edgy photo.
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Everybody using wide zooms should be automatically correcting for vignetting, geometric distortion, CA, etc. in RAW coversion. DxO, LR, ACR and others provide this and it's pretty darn amazing. If you want purposeful distortion, you can turn it off, but in most cases you'll want it. It brings zoom lenses into competition with the very best primes (which can also be corrected).
Long-gone are the days when you had to get it right in the camera and primes were all most self-respecting pros would use. Too few seem aware of the capability of the latest conversion softwares. DxO corrects for every aperture at every focal length of the lenses included in their database. It's amazing. Dave
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I use DXO also - great software for batch conversion aswell.
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