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oh, Look! a photo needs to be critiqued....
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rodi, you on PCP?
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07-07-2011, 10:20 PM | #27 |
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that's cute.
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Reed, you shouldn't have cropped the nose/mouth of the horse, plus I feel like the bottom half of the horse's face isn't in focus? Did she move?
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none of the horse is really in focus, i only wanted the girl in focus
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please excuse noon hour lighting, i didn't have control over that sadly as this was my subjects only available time, i did try to use a flash to fill a little bit, but i could have filled some more.
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My first thought was, "A girl and her horse". With that in mind, I'd like the horse's left eye in focus, at least and I'd crop out that background to the outside of the horse. Still, the girl looks great.
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Chewy, there's a really crappy foreground, particularly on the left side.
The sky is great and the building is great and the mast in front is..."interesting." Maybe a vertical format with emphasis on the main, multi-story part of the building/mast/sky.
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Thanks, Dave, but please post a photo of your own with each critique.
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I don't recommend faking bokeh... just sayin.
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let's try to follow the thread's rules listed in the original post.
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