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Next steps, if you're interested. Use something like Lightroom or DxO Optics Pro to take out that barrel distortion caused by that 18mm lens. I'd pull up the shadows a bit also. The sky looks interesting, so I'd probably have shown a bit more sky and less of the brown walk down below. In other words, get closer to the "rule of thirds." That a rule made to be broken, but when the sky is interesting, you show it off, usually. 99% of the images in this thread have been "tweaked" a bit. Not so much "heavy Photoshopping", although that's welcome, but more like adjusting Shadow and Highlight levels, correcting geometric distortion, raising Contrast a bit and adding Noise Reduction, if needed. You can process as little or as much as you like. Just letting you know what the general trend is on this Thread, in case your wondering. Everyone is welcome.
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I was going back through some RAW files from our UK trip back in Sept. There are still a few I missed processing.
Tintern Abbey Tintern Abbey by Mark Johnson, on Flickr
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12-27-2016, 04:23 PM | #9948 |
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One more. This one shows what you can do with a 16mm lens when you shoot in portrait mode and then crop to landscape. Distortion can be virtually eliminated.
Tintern Abbey by Mark Johnson, on Flickr
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12-27-2016, 04:48 PM | #9949 |
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Mark, that 16-35mm is a great little lens. At 16mm, does LR get rid of the geometric distortion?
Two great shots of that abbey.
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12-27-2016, 05:11 PM | #9950 |
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I don't use LR, but PS does a good job of lining things up straight. You lose a bit of the shot around the edges, but it's worth the trade-off to get straight lines. Keeping the camera level also helps tremendously, although by doing so you tend to get a lot of foreground, which can be a waste. That second shot had a ton of foreground grass in the original portrait mode, so I cropped landscape and still ended up with a decent shot.
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Wow! Thanks so much, guys! I wasn't expecting this kind of response. I really appreciate any and all forms of feedback, so please keep it coming! i spent about 30 minutes out in this spot that day, and took pics from several different perspectives. Hers another untouched image of a lifeguard post at the top of that hill. I captured a bit more of the sky here, and the chair was terrific in person. Hopefully this does it some justice.. Untitled by Justin McIntosh, on Flickr I'll also look in to processing my images a bit. Can you folks recommend any good literature for me to study up on? Sorry for the noob questions... Thanks again! Last edited by PourBoi-Jay; 12-27-2016 at 08:47 PM.. |
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Ed, great shot of two juveniles rough-housing.
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12-27-2016, 10:29 PM | #9956 | |
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This is a very nice shot, with pretty good composition. A classic error is that your horizon is not level. Almost all noob make this mistake, but once it's pointed out to you, you'll see it every time. Those clouds look really interesting, so I would have emphasized them more and tried to get the tops of more clouds. I'm assuming that you're using a zoom and could have gone a little wider to catch more clouds. There are more tutorials for Lightroom than any other software that I know of, BUT I'd recommend just diving in. It's pretty intuitive. After you've rolled around in it a bit, then take some tutorials. Justin, I just looked over at your Flickr site and see two other, stronger versions of this scene. My favorite is this one, with a level horizon and the complete clouds: Untitled by Justin McIntosh, on Flickr
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12-27-2016, 11:13 PM | #9957 |
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Justin, I hope you don't mind, but I took my favorite of your shots and re-cropped it to get the horizon out of the center and remove some "blah" grass. All rules are meant to be broken, but, generally, don't put the horizon right in the center of your images. I do that when there's a reflection, but avoid it in most other situations:
JustinsShotAtShore by Justin Mcintosh, on Flickr What do you think? If you want me to take this down, let me know. BTW, you may want to change your Flickr settings so that just any Tom, Dick or David can steal your stuff.
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It was definitely "Eagle Day" this past Monday up at the NWR.
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Love what you've done with that image, haha. I only made a handful of my images public. The rest are private. I'll keep them all under lock and key from now on Thanks again!!
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You can make images Public in Flickr and still restrict the ability of others to right-click and download. One last thought about the chair image. It looks slightly OOF (out of focus). Your f/11 f-stop should have provided ample DOF (depth of field), so I'm wondering if there's some camera shake. At 1/80-sec., you need to be very steady. Whenever you can get a lens with Image Stabilization or use a body that has it built in, use it. There's also a chance it's DOF. If so, move your AF point around to make sure it's on the chair. Turning on all the AF points and letting the camera make the choice is a recipe for OOF images. Have fun, Dave
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12-28-2016, 05:39 PM | #9962 |
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Lydiard House and Park in Swindon, UK. The house itself was nothing special, but the park had the most amazing looking trees.
Lydiard House and Park by Mark Johnson, on Flickr
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A tree-doctor did amazing things with the tree nearest the house.
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Yeah, I'm not sure if those lopped sections were dead or just recently lopped and expected to grow back. It almost looked like they were practicing bonsai on a very large scale.
Here's a shot of a similar one from closer to the house looking back out. Lydiard House and Park by Mark Johnson, on Flickr
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http://digital-photography-school.com/ I don't agree with everything that they say, but it's mostly good and useful.
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